This is a very nice poem but i think it would be better if you went through it and fixed the things that copy and paste has done to it... GReat poem though 5.5

Woah...What a very depressing poem..i like everythin about the poem...the emotion is so deep..good job..5/5

This is so sad!!! and beautiful!! well done!! :):)

Ahw.,so sad.,but its nice.,keep it up.,XD