Time

by Hawaiizang3l   Jan 23, 2008


TIME

The time is finally here
To start to let go
Though the pain still remains
Its time for me to grow

The tears flow less
Though the memories are still there
But i promise you in time
I wont even care

You may have controlled me
And tried to make me see
It was only you & no one else
And thats the way it had to be

You had chains on my wrists
And chains on my heart
And even though i tried
I could not break them apart

They say love is blind
And i know this to be true
Because i gave so much up
Just to have my heart broken by you!

Copyright 2007 by Kekaulike Dabis
August 23, 2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    I like diz one too...ur amazing...keep it up..

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This was good, but in the second stanza, you used "but" to start the lines twice. Try using another word. Anyway, it's really good though the imagery is good.

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This was good, but in the second stanza, you used "but" to start the lines twice. Try using another word. Anyway, it's really good though the imagery is good.

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Amazing poem. i love the very last paragraph. it ties everything together almost perfectly. 5/5 !props!

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Once again, this is a very good poem.. i dont even have words to explain ur talent.. 5/5

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