This poem was great. it sucks to have given someone your all, and then have them break your heart. been there, done that. and you wrote about it so well.
5/5

ps. i read you post. could you r/r/c on my poem *Depression Game
thank you

Once again, this is a very good poem.. i dont even have words to explain ur talent.. 5/5

Amazing poem. i love the very last paragraph. it ties everything together almost perfectly. 5/5 !props!

This was good, but in the second stanza, you used "but" to start the lines twice. Try using another word. Anyway, it's really good though the imagery is good.

.:CiNdY:.

This was good, but in the second stanza, you used "but" to start the lines twice. Try using another word. Anyway, it's really good though the imagery is good.

.:CiNdY:.

I like diz one too...ur amazing...keep it up..