Rescue Me From You

by Hawaiizang3l   Jan 23, 2008


Rescue Me From You

I remember when you rescued me
From a broken heart
Thought I would never love again
Never did I think id get another start

You brought me Kisses
On our very first date
Kissed me to Kiss The Girl
From that movie Little Mermaid

You texted me good morning
You even texted me good night
For some odd reason
I felt like a Princess meeting her Knight

But my story was different
I had no happy ending in store
Never did I imagine
You wouldnt love me anymore

So now here I wait again
Staring at the stars and the moon
Im just wondering
Whose gonna rescue me from you

Kekaulike Dabis Copyright 2008
January 2, 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This was beautifully sad, Again simple and elegant usually simple pieces of poetry don't do as much for me as descriptive poetry yet this one has touched my heart yet again. I wouldn't be able to pick a favorite part as it is all quite amazing. The flow and word choice was great, they really came together nicely. This is beautiful, simply stunning. Overall a deefinite 5/5 from me. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Wow, i love this poem.. its really heartfelt..my fav stanza is

    But my story was different
    I had no happy ending in store
    Never did I imagine
    You wouldnt love me anymore

    the way u worded this poem and the flow was amzing. keep up ur good work. ur very takented. i cant wait for u to post more on here

  • 16 years ago

    by Krista

    I love it. Very emotional. 5/5. Congrats.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxTaegan Emilyxx

    Whoa. That ending i didnt expect! but i really enjoyed this poem. I like that it did a full circle with you waiting again. Very emotional. I found myself smiling at the beginning and feeling sad at the end.
    Very good.
    xx
    Taegan Emily

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