Whoa. That ending i didnt expect! but i really enjoyed this poem. I like that it did a full circle with you waiting again. Very emotional. I found myself smiling at the beginning and feeling sad at the end.
Very good.
xx
Taegan Emily

I love it. Very emotional. 5/5. Congrats.

Wow, i love this poem.. its really heartfelt..my fav stanza is

But my story was different
I had no happy ending in store
Never did I imagine
You wouldnt love me anymore

the way u worded this poem and the flow was amzing. keep up ur good work. ur very takented. i cant wait for u to post more on here

This was beautifully sad, Again simple and elegant usually simple pieces of poetry don't do as much for me as descriptive poetry yet this one has touched my heart yet again. I wouldn't be able to pick a favorite part as it is all quite amazing. The flow and word choice was great, they really came together nicely. This is beautiful, simply stunning. Overall a deefinite 5/5 from me. ~Mel