by Alicia Jane
Oii this reminds me of the guy im with atm, |
by Hawaiizang3l
Aww girl, try not to keep going back to someone who isnt worth it! You can do better!! We shouldnt be his 2nd best! |
by Christina
Wow i can relate to this poem 100% which is sad but true! it was very well written! 5/5 |
by sexyCheckers
I liked this poem; I liked the way you ended each stanza with "over and over again" but it reminded me of the song by tim mcgraw and nelly(?) and i didnt like that song lol nah nah its a good poem!! 5/5 |
by Dark Secrets
I hate when that happens... I sooo hate being controled... good job |
by jLegendc
This poem speaks the truth.. there r some ppl in relationships that always takes the blame.. again.. my bestfrnd can relate to this... for some reason.. you guys hav the same troubles that you've been through.. great poem! =] |
I like this poem! Its not my favorite but I like how you repeated "Over and Over again" the flow seemed alittle rocky to me |
by Shinobi
This poem is touching. I could feel the sad emotions all the way through. The repetance of the last line made the main idea even stronger. The flow and rhyming were great. A piece many can relate to, 5/5 |
by Lizaveta
So sad |
Luv it.. its very sad, it describe what every gril does basiclly.. wish it was longer though. |