Falling for love

by xXBleedxBlackXx   Jan 23, 2008


She stands on the edge
just looking down with
tears in her eyes she looks to the
sky with the moon over head
her long black dress blowing in the
wind Her blood red hair wrapping around
her now he left her alone and cold
for a girl he didn't even know She loved him though
till the every end the vowels she took while she
held his hand They mean nothing now yet she still
wears the ring forever she loved him forever she tried
forever she loved him till the every day she died she takes a deep breath and a single step forward and falls to the earth to remember a world when he was her's.

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Tears I bleed

    I like how this poem tells the story of the girl losing her loved one and how she seeks remembrance by stepping off the cliff or maybe she seeks final peace, either way it makes me think of all the possible feelings this girl had to push her over the edge.. or maybe im just putting too much thought here... either way i really like it

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