Only he can see

by Ashley   Jan 23, 2008


I sit alone as tear drops fall,

no one is here, no one at all

everyone is busy with their own lives

no one has time to see me cry

even when I smile they can't see

that deep down inside something is hurting me

my boyfriend gets mad when I don't tell him what's wrong

he even yelled when I didn't respond

It's not that I didn't want him to know

It's just that he wouldn't understand the words that I wrote

So I keep my thoughts bottled up inside

and they can't come out no matter how much I try

I look around and someone's there

Finally I know there's someone who cares

I never realized it but now I see

Roger is always watching over me

He will keep me safe, he will keep me strong

and I will always be able to sleep in his arms...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is really good... i loved the concept..

    but one thing i suggest is maybe putting it together and not spacing it..

    it was kinda hard to read like that.. maybe try a four line stanza type of thing. you know?

    but overall i enjoyed it. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    This is a really nice poem. It had a excellent flow and rhyme to it. A really enjoyable read. :] Nice work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    U have nice work here keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by xxrachxx

    Awww nice poem

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