Comments : Mournful Vision

  • 16 years ago

    by Solus

    About time, I remember you telling me about this one. Seems to have turned out quite nicely. Now if only there was some way to lite of fire under your butt to finish the reat.....

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem has a great choice of wording and a good rhyming flow
    =]
    Excellent job
    5/5