I like it all except the last two lines because they sound a little forced like you were trying too hard to rhyme with the word 'back' but I really liked your line "I can't seem to find a cheat" that was really original and good!
Nice job!
*ME*

I like it all exept for the last stanza. I see where you were trying to go but it seems that you simply tried to hard. Other than that i really injoyed reading this piece of work. Keep up the good work. 4/5

Signed,
Alexander