Heart in a Bag

by Emilline   Jan 23, 2008


I hold my heart in a bag
Close to me and tight
I put up a wall around me
Make everything out of sight

But when your lips move
And words begin to speak
I cant hold it in
My heart begins to leak

The wall falls fast
Just like a jet plane
I begin to smile
Its your heart, I want to gain

This bag is too small
For my heart grew
Loving you
Is all I want to do

(This is my very first poem ever! But now i have like a gazzilion more)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Haha this is a cute very first poem. I liked it. Just look at the other comment about the rhyming I mean here it's not bad but I think you need more emotion then. nice job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexander

    I must agree with MyEscape, for your first poem this is simply magnificent. The message is also one with great meaning. I could say 'nice work' but that would be an understatment if this is truely your first piece of work. If you try to hone your skills in writing poetry i can pretty much promise that will go far. 5/5

    Signed,
    Alexander

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    For first poem I say GOOD JOB! It's got a nice rhyme and flow. Very nice job! I hope to see more work from you!
    *ME*

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