Deceiving

by Emilline   Jan 23, 2008


Mad with anger
Mad with revenge
Everything about you
Pushes me to an edge

Your fake smiles
Your stupid lies
The way you cut
Just to get guys

You think you're so perfect
You put others down
The world doesn't revolve around you
You don't wear a crown

Your laughs like a hyena
Or a fork caught in a blender
What's your problem
"Miss. Big Spender"

Your secrets out
I see behind your eyes
It's not a lost girl
But a feeling of pride

You've succeeded in your mission
You made someone pissed
But don't get to happy
There's someone you missed

I've moved on from angry
You're out of my life
You can't get to me
Not even with your knife

People give you attention
For the bad things you do
But I can write a poem
How about you?

(sorry its kinda mean)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alexander

    It's a very interesting piece i must admit. Very imaginative and creative. I like the fact that i can just picture a girl that looks perfect and that cuts for attention. The only thing that could probably be better is the flow of it all. Not that it doesn't have a nice flow and all it's just that it is a bit choppy in a few places. Very nice piece of work. 4/5

    Signed,
    Alexander