by Emilline Jan 23, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Mad with anger |
by Alexander
It's a very interesting piece i must admit. Very imaginative and creative. I like the fact that i can just picture a girl that looks perfect and that cuts for attention. The only thing that could probably be better is the flow of it all. Not that it doesn't have a nice flow and all it's just that it is a bit choppy in a few places. Very nice piece of work. 4/5 |