Desired Love! <3

by Christina   Jan 23, 2008


Why is love so hard to find? I
look around and see couples in
every direction. Girls smiling
up at their boyfriend thinking
how lucky they are to have him
in their life. The boys looken
back at them thinking they too
are lucky to have her. Realizen
I don't have a boy to dream of
when I'm sleeping and to awake
the next day getten dressed to
see him. I want my fairytale I
want my prince charming. Weeks
go by and I still don't have a
boy to love me. I finally find
someone that makes me smile to
make me laugh. I finally found
my prince charming that will I
hope love me and cherish me. I
too will love them and cherish
them. I can't help but daydream
about him. I love him a lot and
would die without him. If ever
haven to choose between him or
breathing I would choose using
my last breathes to say I love
you! And I love you so much I'd
let you go and wait for you to
come back. If you love someone
tell them before it's too late.

(lol ik its very cheesey!! lol it's called a rectangle poem altho lol when i put it on here it doesnt look much like a rectangle poem ne more!!...i had to write it for school)......its alot harder than it looks and ik theres grammar errors but you kinda have to, to make it work

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  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    This is a very nice piece. and i really like it. itz heartfelt and touching. definitely not cheesy. lol. i feel like this all the time. and it's depressing but all we can do and just try and move on with our days right. . and we'll find the right person when least suspected. :] 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    1. I don't think this is cheesy.
    2. I don't understand why anyone would downrate this poem.
    Lastly, I think you pointed out some points that a lot of people should think about.

    "Why is love so hard to find? I
    look around and see couples in
    every direction."

    Your message was very potent and powerful and couldn't have been said any better. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    I thought this was so cute. I have so been there before. Keep up the writing you have talent. and don't worry in time you WILL find that special guy. everyones feels the way you do at some point or another.

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