Comments : Synonym For Defeat

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    A girl like you
    liking a guy like me
    fairy tales done it
    but why can't we

    this is sooooo good!!! omg and so true!! this is something i would want someone to send me in a letter!!! great job!! :):)

  • 16 years ago

    by SUSPEKT

    Great work on the poem love it

  • 16 years ago

    by emILY

    Wow, this is a really good poem. You put a lot of feeling in it. I'm not just saying that because you liked mine. Yours reflect things it says; like a movie. You can see and feel it inside you. Great Job! ^^'

  • 16 years ago

    by keithnwv

    I reallly like this poem . it is short but says so much.
    also, i really like your name. very catchy

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    I love it! the ending was beautiful and the choice of words were just perfect! it flowed nicely 2...keep it up, 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by Alyse

    Awesome poem :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Danielle Tesar

    OMG i love it your an exellant poet....... and i love this poem... its GREAT!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Yes i like this one too. I have told my girlfriend that i'd love to spend a day inside her head. Great Write.

  • 16 years ago

    by tiffany

    I think is on of my favorites

  • 16 years ago

    by Alison

    This is my new favorite. I absolutely love this. The imagery is great. =] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Aww wow! why cnt a guy be that mad bout me :( she must be special!! loving the first, second, fifth and seventh stanza X