Hey i had a poem similar to this althou i like yours to where did you get the idea from???

Very nice poem. i see myself there =)

Great poem, I like how you're poems end... it gives me hope.

This is Awesome!

Nice.. i love this kinda poems.. poems that tells stories and has been described in detail.. good job again! =]

This is truely an amazing poem. It flowed so nicely, the way you described the "depression" seemed so real. Liked the choosing of words and rhyming as well 5/5

This poem was different. Very deep, very good. The flow was amazing, the words you've used are awesome, and editing by NightmareChild was a good choice. 5/5!

The editing was great, kudos for her. But also kudos for you cause this poem was very vivid and powerful! My favorite stanza is definitely the last one!

I love this one! I hope you keep writing, I love all your poems! This is another favorite, and I can really relate to it! Every line fits together perfectly!

I like. It's good, shows the struggle that hundreds of teens go through when battling with depression, i like however that you are defiant in accepting the depression in the poem. Your poem has a good quality fighting spirit and uses good language.
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This really is a great poem!
something i can really relate to!
i can feel the raw emotion in it and the title impelled me to read it!
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This was an *extremely* inspirational poem. the whole thing was strong. The metaphor throughout the poem had me imagining a girl actually being pulled in by chains. I loved it. I think you couldn't have chosen a better topic, or expressed it better then you did. I absolutely loved the ending. Stay strong, and keep writing! [: 5/5

The flow was spot on, pace conveyed the feeling of escaping the depression and the rhyme was really natural. Great use of personification and a fantastically strong message. 5/5

Em xXx

You are wrong,
If this is what you believe.
I'm sorry Dear Depression,
YOU'LL NEVER CONTROL ME!
^^^
Bravo dear girl ... that is an ending I love to hear. It shouts strength and freedom.

Such sadness penned up until the last stanza them Wham .... you deliver an excellent inspiring ending. Well done Lace!
Luanne

I loved the adventure u put into it.
it had me thrilled all the way to the end.
nice i think i will some more of ur work.
5/5

Wow... this is am excellent description...
very powerful poem...

"You are wrong,
If this is what you believe.
I'm sorry Dear Depression,
YOU'LL NEVER CONTROL ME!"

^^ loved these lines... it can provide so much strength to so many people...

excellent job...

Pretty good but i always see depression as something that just happens, not always controlable for me