Comments : Luckless Lover

  • 16 years ago

    by Unrequited

    Oh dear... this is so sad. not true either, i hope. It is a wonderful write, however. :) I tend to read sad poems very slowly, and when I do, you can really feel the raw emotion in this piece. Well done, wolf!! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Lol ty nee-chan! daisuki

    this is beautiful... i love the refrain. there is one thing i would suggest, though. you spelled some of the words wrong for their meanings :)