I Must Go

by Hawaiizang3l   Jan 24, 2008


I Must Go

Im taking it day by day
Living without your face
Hoping I'll be ok
I must move on

I just can't seem to forget
The pain you left me with
My cheeks soaken wet
Is this wrong

The memories still remain
My tears they leave a stain
Just want to ease the pain
I must ignore

All the fimilar things
Are driving me insane
Just wanna scream your name
Can I stay strong

I'm letting the past go by
At least I can say I tired
It's so hard to say goodbye
But I must go

Copyright 2008 by Kekaulike Dabis
January 23, 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    Yeah must agree...emotion filled and powerful......it seems like ur a strong person and i kno for sure ull be ok..tc..

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This was absolutely amazing. The whole poem itself was great. It showed so much emotion in it. The flow was great and it's very well written. Better than the two I just read. Great job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I liked this alot, I found the word choice to be simple and effective creating a beautiful flow. The emotions portrayed were sad and touching creating such deep feelings over the atmosphere. The meaning of this poem touched my heart really gripped onto it as you poured your heart out it felt as though it was me. Well done a sweetly sad read. 5/5 ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    This is such a sad poem.. but its very strong. and so true. i know the feeling, keep up the good work, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by A l y s s a

    This is great. It's so emotion filled and powerful. (Like Taegah Emily) I can totally relate that stanza with a past relationship.

    Good job, please write some more.

    Ally. x

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