I feel like i can relate to this poem with one of my ex's.
Its a very strong and emotional poem. I really enjoyed reading it.
"The pain you left me with
My cheeks soaken wet"
this was the best part.

Also u may want to fix spelling mistakes. it doesnt bother me, but it does bother alot of people.....and they will let you know!!! =D

xx
Taegan Emily

This is great. It's so emotion filled and powerful. (Like Taegah Emily) I can totally relate that stanza with a past relationship.

Good job, please write some more.

Ally. x

This is such a sad poem.. but its very strong. and so true. i know the feeling, keep up the good work, 5/5

I liked this alot, I found the word choice to be simple and effective creating a beautiful flow. The emotions portrayed were sad and touching creating such deep feelings over the atmosphere. The meaning of this poem touched my heart really gripped onto it as you poured your heart out it felt as though it was me. Well done a sweetly sad read. 5/5 ~Mel

This was absolutely amazing. The whole poem itself was great. It showed so much emotion in it. The flow was great and it's very well written. Better than the two I just read. Great job!

.:CiNdY:.

Yeah must agree...emotion filled and powerful......it seems like ur a strong person and i kno for sure ull be ok..tc..