It's a very very well written piece of poetry. It's possible that the word 'and' and 'so' were overused just a little, but not too severly. I liked so many stanzas in this that I refuse to copy and paste them all in here. I like the line about handing you the sunglasses because the future's looking bright. So much of this poem is easy to relate to and draws the reader in. The fact that you never state where you are going or if in fact it's a literal place is really great. It leaves that up to the reader. Nice job!
Charisma*

TAKE ME WITH YOU!!!! :P lol. this is a great poem. i really liked it a lot. it flowed welll and painted an image of where i wanna be. thank you for the comment on mine as well.

butterfly kisses and bear hugz

Great job. I love the way you painted a pic for your readers. Awesome job.
-vino

Just like all your other poems, the ryhming is great and the flow is so smooth.great job on this.5/5
**harlea
p.s. thankz for the comments