Forgot!!!

by Bhavin   Jan 24, 2008


You forgot that I liked you too much
I forgot that you didn't like me enough.
You forgot that I treasured you as gold
I forgot that you were being so cold.
You forgot those games we played for fun
I forgot that you toyed with my emotions.

You forgot that I found you so attractive
I forgot that you found me so obstructive.
You forgot my heart's loud racing
I forgot that you were never hearing.
You forgot that I raised you up so high
I forgot that you pushed me low and dry.

You forgot that I wanted to be with you
I forgot that I was excess baggage for you.
You forgot to remind that I was pathetic
I forgot that you took advantage of it.
You forgot that I was having hopes and dreams
I forgot that you crushed them like petty jelly beans.

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  • 16 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Dear Bhavin

    i bet this is a surprise to you! sorry, have been lousy at visiting the site and not commenting on everyone's work.

    this verse is beautiful - love the contrasts, it carries a beautiful, yet haunting emotion.

    however, the rhyme in a lot of places seems a little forced.

    i loved the raw emotion that runs through this.

    great!
    shobhana

  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Very good reading.