Just Wondering

by XxkorenCrowxX   Jan 24, 2008


I'm just wondering,
If you want to be more than friends?
And if you would want be with me,
Forever until the end?
I'm just wondering,
If you will be there to hold me tight?
To keep me safe and warm,
And hold me all through the night?
I'm just wondering,
If I could ever steal a kiss?
If you would want to stay with me,
And make me feel like this?
I'm just wondering,
If you could ever hug me?
So I can feel just,
How perfect Heaven can be.
I'm just wondering,
If we could be together?
And I want to hear you say
That you will love me forever

This poem was made for my man Carlos Charging Elk. I want to tell him that I love him very much and that he is my world no matter what .
No one will ever tear us apart but you and me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by John Bowlby

    5/5. You definitely have talent with writing poetry; conveying your thoughts in a meaningful way while painting a clear image for the reader. Your repetition of 'I'm just wondering' is also well used. It's always nice to see someone else who can actually WRITE poetry.

    Best of luck, and please keep writing!