Unwanted love

by JEFF   Jan 24, 2008


Standing outside your window,
You look out across the town.
I look for a way up,
you look for a way down.

The castle gate is well guarded,
Pulled completely sealed.
The walls are flat and smooth,
No entrance has been revealed

With only one sword, one knife,
And a heart that burns of fire.
I long to be close to you,
Your love i desire.

As one individual,
Behind the walls must be twenty.
Preparing for a battle,
In where i can overtake plenty.

The passion to be with the one i want,
finding strength to scale the wall.
Even though the king said no,
Its you that i want and you that i call.

Reaching the top,
Pulling out my sword.
Slaying all the guards,
As i reach your door.

Breaking through the lock,
Releasing you into my arms.
Ten more guards coming up the stairs,
Ten more i will harm.

Making our way out the gate,
The king screaming "Come back with my daughter".
We ride off into the sunset,
Leaving the king among the slaughtered.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Aww thats so going in my favs... makin the fairy tale world part of ur own nice write great imagination and amazing poem! keep it up! 5/5 always
    Kate~LSB23

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    A very beautiful write. this piece is filled with such passion, which I admire. I really like this poem and the the structure was very good. Your flow was excellent and this poem was very well written and very well thought out. :] The ending was perfect [mt favorite part] :] 5/5.