awww how sweet that was a really great poem and i hope you keep writting!

wow thet blew me away you dont have to worry im not ever gonna leave you

awwww that wuz so sweet and i hop e u dont ever we r gonna be friends forever

awww, thats the cutest poem ever, love da way u put the words even though it doesnt rhyme..i like the way its written...keep it up

there right that was a cute sweet peom keep up the good work
i have written a new one called
Erase the nothingness, check it out while your checking out my other ones. it'll make ya think