by Dark Secrets Jan 24, 2008
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
How saddening is the birth of a star?! |
by CRAFTY KEN
Nice work, I could not stop thinking as I read your poem about the Star that appeared in Bethlehem that led the Wise men to the home of the infant Jesus. I believe that Star performed as in your poem, building and becoming brighter each night until it burst and disappeared. |
by gumshuda
I've never read a poem as this...It is definitely a 5 stared poem |
by Brix Ambray
Nice idea...5/5..i like the choice of words..simple,clear and unique |
by P00ki3B3ar
This truly is a unique poem ive never read a poem about a star and they are such beautiful things that most ppl don give the time to notice im glad you wrote such a lovely poem it was a great touching poem i especially loved how you gave it life, bravo 5/5!! |
by Saving Grace
This is so beautiful. I loved the way you wrapped it up aswell. Loved it. |