Wow!!.. You are very good.. I love how it all flows to gether.. And I love it.. I look up at the stars every night.. because they are so beautiful!!.. Keep up the good work..

I have to say that I really like your poem. I think that the nature section of this site has to be where one can find really wonderfully written poems. They arent old and dull like so may other love poems Im sure even mine fall into that category once in awhile. I found your work very interesting. Keep up the good words and may all your writings bring you peace.

This poem is very well written and i really enjoyed reading it, Great job- your a talented writter.
Nice choice of wording used to =]

Wow this poem is so beautiful!! ... i love the whole idea in general about the stars in the sky and the way you ended it was great.. this is an amazing poemm... very well written and i really really enjoyed reading it.. amazing! 5/5 =)

Zahra,

Awww...what a beautiful story you have made! I am so impressed by you!
I loved every line of this litle gem.
I am going to add you to my favorites now!

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

*To lovers a star makes a language of romance
Stars are a symbol of greatness and chance
So many stars have risked there lives now
So how can a person not look and say wow *

wow, such beautiful story. well done my friend you really has the talent to write such beautiful poems

Hey there, i think i am the luckiest one because i read it before you submit it !!! yepy yeah!

5star+ for your star

This is so beautiful. I loved the way you wrapped it up aswell. Loved it.

So many stars have risked there lives now
So how can a person not look and say wow.

Loved that part. Was an amazing write, you certainatly have alot of talent. Keep it up! 5/5

This truly is a unique poem ive never read a poem about a star and they are such beautiful things that most ppl don give the time to notice im glad you wrote such a lovely poem it was a great touching poem i especially loved how you gave it life, bravo 5/5!!

Nice idea...5/5..i like the choice of words..simple,clear and unique

I've never read a poem as this...It is definitely a 5 stared poem

Nice work, I could not stop thinking as I read your poem about the Star that appeared in Bethlehem that led the Wise men to the home of the infant Jesus. I believe that Star performed as in your poem, building and becoming brighter each night until it burst and disappeared.
5/5
Ken