Comments : Think wit da head on ur shoulder not da 1 in ur pants

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiffany

    That was really powerfully written, i loved how you were so strong, and the last two lines were the best, i think. awesome job!

    Tiff

  • 16 years ago

    by nering

    This poem is very strong i have heard another randittion though great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    U're word selective!
    The title of this poem by itself invites readers not to go but after they discover what's behind.. Then they find a very nice written poem..
    Like it very much؛‎ it made me laugh a lot.. keep it up 5/5