Comments : Beautiful

  • 16 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Oh, wow! Lil sis! this is amazing! breathtaking! oh i have felt this way before, so sweetly so rarely, and you express it so perfectly. wonderful job, i'm so proud of you:)

    imotoosan wa daisuki desu! (i love my lil sis)!

  • 16 years ago

    by Liz

    I really like it :)
    sounds lovey

  • 16 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I like this poem, its sweet and I love the image of the ocean in the sun... Beautiful.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    I like this poem, its sweet and I love the image of the ocean in the sun... Beautiful.

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Thank you :)