Sweet breath

by jack   Jan 24, 2008


The sweet breath
its wondering path
brings life, brings hope, glory
shadows of failure slide away
the past ripples and dies out
nothing but future breath
breath to be had
to be found and wanted

supporting many
abandoning others
cruel yet kind
passionate yet vile
its one that is many

uncontrollable power
recognizable in its force
tells tales of love,
or does it breath lies,
unanswered questions
we do not know
breath is our life
and everything thats in it

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  • 16 years ago

    by jack

    Interesting Jack... slightly more positive which is refreshing. There is some element of ambiguity in this which is quite nice.

    Mr. P