A well written poem, even if its short, its very strong in emotion, cant wait to read some more!
ragards Tinna

That was really sweet i could actually see all that i love the poem short but well written

Nice poem. for some reason i think the meaning is lost a little but i love it anyway!!

Hey that was sweet and i enjoyed alot of depth to it i liked it i will rate it keep writing i wud like to read some more of ur poetry xxxx

Very sweet...
cant wait to hear more ..
i think that there is a very strong feeling behind this poem well worked!!!!:DD

Very sweet...
cant wait to hear more ..
i think that there is a very strong feeling behind this poem well worked!!!!:DD