In the stanza right before the last it should be your * not you, I believe. Unless I'm reading it wrong.
The poem is amazing, darling.
Other than that 'your' it's flawless.
Amazing.
Perfect.
I'm so happy to see something other than a sad/dark poem come out of you. xD
it's like.
Refreshing. xD
Aha.
You did a wonderful job, darling.
WonderfulWonderfulWonderful.