by David Paul Jan 25, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I'm sitting naked falling fast, |
by Mishka
Hey awesome song! i wish i knew the melody... :) i loved it it was so original and quite different. 5/5 |
by Lemma
This is so honest and beautiful and sad and sweet (that's a lot of "and"s!), flows really well just like words tumbling from your mouth. 5/5, |
by Kaila
Wow..This is amazing. Every line made me feel well not so lonely on valentines day. You have a real talent for this. I love that you don't rhyme because sometimes rhyming takes away from the emotion and intensity so nice work.I loved every bit of it keep writing |
Wow a sad poem i liked its uniqueness not much to say nice poem though 5/5 |
I'm sitting naked falling fast, |