I'm sitting naked falling fast,
with cigarette butts at my feet,
thinking about you and me,
and everything we can achieve,
the radio is blaring songs,
of past regrets and lost thoughts
with the twilight passing slowly by.

I really impressed with that stanza, very adorable and well worded. There's nothing to complain, 5/5 for sure

Wow a sad poem i liked its uniqueness not much to say nice poem though 5/5

Wow..This is amazing. Every line made me feel well not so lonely on valentines day. You have a real talent for this. I love that you don't rhyme because sometimes rhyming takes away from the emotion and intensity so nice work.I loved every bit of it keep writing
5/5

This is so honest and beautiful and sad and sweet (that's a lot of "and"s!), flows really well just like words tumbling from your mouth. 5/5,

Em xXx

Hey awesome song! i wish i knew the melody... :) i loved it it was so original and quite different. 5/5