by bekka dollface Jan 25, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
What is this? |
I agree wit kalee but it is absolutely good one, totally understand but This is great so far. Keep writing! |
by Kalee
This is a good poem, but it needs a bit of fixing up. although it is a good poem with good choice of words, the flow is off in a few places which makes it kind of hard to understand. |