Awh, Mike, I love this. It is sad, but it has great feeling. 5/5 =)

We all deserve to live in a dream world....beautiful poem

Ooh,sad, wish it wasnt a dream, very buetiful poem though

Oooo u really put ur feelings into that poem
good job and i think if that girl sees this poem she'll be like WOW

I can definatly relate to this one.
I'm still waiting on the day when my reality is better then my wildest dreams.