by Mr Rhee Jan 25, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
There are times when everything |
Again, a very beautiful love poem. |
by Alexander
I can see where you were trying to go with this piece, i just think you might have tried a little to hard. Some of the lines seemed a bit forced. The twist in the middle was a shock and it keep me reading tell the end to see what happened. The imagery in it is also very breath-taking. All together i must say it is a very heart-stopping piece. 4/5 |