I think life isn't about what you look like, its about who you are inside..

That is the most honest thing i have ever heard, i don't care what people look like, because people who love themselves too much are the worst kind to be around.

Great poem anyone can relate.
5/5

This is a very good expression of how you feel. Judgement isn't a very good thing and I have also learned that.. You are absolutly right.

I know how it feels..jus be strong and lean on to those people who trust and love you for who you are...great poem..5/5

Definiately good. you put the real things into this work that really makes anything work good. reality, meaning, and real emotion. ur expression was great.

A message can be seen in this poem that many people need to learn. You are completely correct when you say that one should be judged by how they are on the inside and not how they look on the outside. One of the problems i see in this poem is the punctuation. Maybe it is just me but i think if you added a few commas in a couple of places it would make the flow a lot better. All together it is a very moving and magnificent piece. Keep up the good work. 4/5

Signed,
Alexander

Amazing poem.. 5/5 check out some of my poems!

Well I think this is a very well written poem it is definetly truthful and right in saying what it does.. It's true though people shouldn't be judged like we like to do and I mean we all do at some point or another. So great job I enjoyed reading it.

Beck

Great Job. Easy to tell this came from the heart. Keep it up! 5/5

--Jack

I agree with this. i am always judge without being known first and it just shows you u that the people who actually took the time to get to kno you are are ur true frineds in life

I think this has the potential to be a good poem. but it seems like it is set with in paragraphs instead of stanzas.

for example:

Just when you think your life is going okay
something happens and you just fall apart.. whether its because you got lied to and then found out the truth, or you realized someone wasn't who you thought they were or that you seem to be just messing everything up

istead write

Perfect life with in your eyes
then everything seems to fall apart
lies with in truth
truth with in lies

or you can keep to your original format but break it up more

example:

Just when you think your life
is going okay; something happens
you just fall apart..
whether its because you got lied to
and then found out the truth,
or you realized someone
wasn't who you thought they were
or that you seem to be just messing everything up

it has great potential.. but when i read it i seen a poem within a story instead of a story with in a poem

That is one inspiring poem. i agree with everything you say. i used to be like you and judge people before i got to know them. but as time passed by and i met new people along the road, i realized that i have no right in judging anyone. everyone is different in one way or another, whether it's their looks, their personality, the way they behave etc. you cant judge a person if you dont know the person. i enjoyed reading your piece very much. keep up the good work!! =D