by william Jan 25, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The sharp blade is boundless, no ties |
by Pesamenteiro
Okay..Well, it was pretty good but I think it would have done beter if it didn't rhyme, I have thtat problem too,, you make it rhyme but it sound forced, you should try to think ahead to the second line before you write the first, it really helps |