Nice poem, nice story and well written

good job

I like this, its like a story is being told. There should be a follow up poem. Nice job.

XxXKristie MarieXxX

Ooh this is interesting to read but it's GOOD, THOUGH!

Hiya,

Enjoyable to read, not too complicated. A poem about one of lifes lessons.

Take care

Michael

Well thx for commenting mine so heres my comment.....i know what you mean by this, just think of it the other way around and thats my boat...hope all is well. Great poem, great words.

Eveyone changes over the years and this poem proves it nice poem=)