by cicek Jan 25, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
We tried, but thought we failed so we tried agian, but this time we werent so lucky.because of me we arent able to talk to each other with my parents permission, they just dont understand...How long would we be able to keep going like this,How long would it last |
by Dark Secrets
Wow... nice feelings flowing there... good luck with your relationship |
The feelings are true but you need to put the words in more rhyming way not neccessary though but makes the poem much better |