i would say that i enjoyed reading really but i will say to put it in more ryming way will make it much better....
anyway this is MY OPINION nothing more
as long as feelings are true you can write whatever you want and i mean it hehe
16 years ago
by mandy
That was really good, i like it a lot, (maybe try and put it in a diffrent format), but other then that, i really do think it was awsome, keep on wrting, you are a good poet!!!