WOWWWWWWWWW you are a amazing writer I CAN feel each word

I felt you used the same rhyme too much. Also a few punctuation and spacing, or punctuation errors It was a unique poem. It was not my favorite but I felt it was a unique way to write. It's like thoughts were rushing through your mind and you put them down despite the rhythm being off. It was okay. Just not the best. Three.