This poem was rather intresting. but the flow seemed a bit off n it also seemed a bit forced.. overall its a very good poem

The title is kinda unique and also love the content too. And I really love this stanza:

If I could put into melody,
Those laughs, that voice,
I might create a song only for me,
So I will always hear your voice
even in a crowd of noise...

It's just simply deep and I really appreciate this one!!! 5/5 for sure!!!

Hmm what a great soundtrack! the message was truly poweful and captivated! seems really full of deep emotions.. very creative keep it up 5/5

Aww i wish someone would dedicate a poem like this to me!
alright my only thoughts are for
"That would be rare and oustanding,"
the word should be spelled "outstanding"
justa typo, but you might want to fix it.
and
"I wonder how long will I be waiting..."
it would sound much better to ME
as
"I wonder how long I'll be waiting..."
just see how you like it.

those are what i thought needed fixing.

I loved how you put mariah carey in there. she sure can hit a damn high note!
5/5

Very good poem! I loved everything about it starting with the flow and the emotion of passion. The vocabulary was immaculate.

If I could put into melody,
Those laughs, that voice,
I might create a song only for me,
So I will always hear your voice
even in a crowd of noise...

^^my favorite stanza =}
Perfectly and beautifully written
5/5

PrElUdE 2 A KiSs

I like this poem very much, but in the second stanza i think, you repeated the word "voice" twice, and it made it sound a little weird. The rhyming seemed a little forced in places but it was still an emotional poem, 4/5

That was a cute and amazing read. that is something that no one could put into words.. 5/5 !props!

Aw .it was really romantic and it rhymed a lot and it made sense how you put it together i loved it a lot i wished a guy would write a poem for me like that . the person that you dedicated to must be really lucky to have a guy as talented as you for writing poems .great job .

I like the storyline of this poem. the idea is beautiful and makes sense. Very creative as well. It was a little bumpy but not bad. 4/5