This ones good. I like the things you write about Jenna; call me crazy, but I do. Probably because; of the way you put things. & Also because of your background. Please, keep writing. You'll go far I swear. (: Iloveyou.

Wow!!! This is a very, strong, emotional poem. Every word is filled with such raw hatred (I can actually feel the hatred myself). It's so full of emotion. I don't no if this makes sense to you or not; but, it's like you captured hate itself and let it write out its own message. I really enjoyed reading this. You really are creative and talented. I look forward to reading more of your work. I hope that you take the time to read some of the other members poetry of The Official Creative Crew, and see if you can give them a few pointers. Great Job !

Letty