by Bubbles Jan 26, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
You were my dream when I was not sleeping |
Umm, I liked it. The first two stanzas were the best, they were well written, but the other two just seemed like add-ons, like you had to put them there. I really like the lines 'You were my dream when I was not sleeping' and 'You made my heart turn in every direction', they were both well put and rather unique I thought. |
by Tessy
I love this poem..beautiful, it is right from the heart...Keep writing! |