I love this poem..beautiful, it is right from the heart...Keep writing!

Umm, I liked it. The first two stanzas were the best, they were well written, but the other two just seemed like add-ons, like you had to put them there. I really like the lines 'You were my dream when I was not sleeping' and 'You made my heart turn in every direction', they were both well put and rather unique I thought.

Brad