Endless Nights Savior

by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop   Jan 26, 2008


Abandoning my comfort zone,
Seeking out my emotions,
I see the light on the horizon,
Lit by your devotion.

A beacon in the darkness,
A bon fire in the night,
You lit a fire in my soul,
That burns so very bright.

Quickly all my senses,
Abandon their defenses,
This world that I enter,
Holds only sweet surrender,

Yet I silently yearn,
For the light that I see
These feelings I have,
Now secretly possessed me,

So tell why do I fight,
This bliss that awaits,
When I feel so many things,
I can almost taste.

I guess the greatest war,
I have now to fight,
Will be myself,
Lest I be stuck in this endless night.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Amazing baby.
    It's like perfect :

    " Quickly all my senses,
    Abandon their defenses,
    This world that I enter,
    Holds only sweet surrender,"

    Amazing lines.

    This line though :
    " That I can almost taste."

    Well it goes great with the poem, but it kind of threw me off, eh.

    But, that line does go with the poem, mentioning it was a bit off. BUT, Maybe if you took out the word " that " to help it? Idk.
    Maybe it's just me

    BUt, amazing job baby