My Latest Obsession#1

by khobo   Jan 26, 2008


Why do I want to cry every time I hear you?
Yes, you instantaneously make me think,
Think of something I love.
But why?
Why does it seem to hurt like a sudden shock to the heart?
I've continuously listened to you everyday,
But yet it only hits me now.
Why does it feel like all that I have inside me...
Is bubbling into one big mess,
Aching to the center of the core?
Why do you touch me that deep,
But yet I can't relate?
What connection do we share,
That makes my soul beg for true tears,
That'll set it all free?

**Still in progress**

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    At first i was thinkin you were missin that someone coz she probbaly left you or somethin but in the end you mentioned why did she touch you so deep and yet you cant relate..I was confused about the idea you were trying to portray probably i have to read the part 2..Anyhow, i will still vote 5 as it was your genuine feelings you poured into it..It came straight from your heart..