So Strong..

by kate   Jan 26, 2008


The perfect night.

everything going right.

nothing could spoil it.

nothing.

he took her hand.

whispered in her ear.

in the middle of nowhere.

she didn't care.

trust.

he kissed her.

one last time.

before.

water turned red.

------

her life.

in his hands.

he was so strong.

scream.

scream.

scream.

no one can her you.

in the middle of nowhere.

left.

without a trace.

the dismay in her eyes.

cried one last tear.

never again.

------

breathing.

lost.

pulse.

gone.

life.

over.

nothingness.

her corpse left.

with but a single rose.

held in her hands.

the petals fall.

and float away.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Invited

    Amazing-just love it and the structure layout is fantastic. You definitely have my vote i hope i have yours!...you have talent. The emotion and emphasis on the emotion was brilliant.
    5/5

    ~chinwe~