Comments : Better Off...

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    Best poem ever. This is simply great. I love this. For the love of god keep up this good work...

    Yours truely,
    -mello193

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    This is really really good. even for a subject that i hate deeply. it is great. however cutting, not so much. i know i sound like one of those stupid ppl that don't "know" anything but seriously. if it helped so well would u keep having to do it. if it was REAL help. wouldn't u feel better for a while?
    thanks for the somments. I really apretiate them. and i do a kinda 1 for one thing btw. so feel free to comment. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Freckles

    I loved the "its not cause I wanted attention" part ! really good
    keep it up x

  • 16 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    It'd not because i wanted attention, <--believe you meant it's

    Great poem, the emotions are one of the key elements in writing a good sad poem to make the reader get into it, cutting is a serious but touching subject and many can connect to it, as can I, great work good flow, keep it up.

    -Ian