I actually like seeing where people began. I thought this was done well. I liked how you incorporated the title into the poem. ADHD is something a lot of people can't have control of. It really takes a toll on people and changes their life. It was described very well here. I liked also all the little details such as "Sparks misfire circuits that are wired differently" It was neat. You could picture the electrical currents moving back and forth. All in all a great job. :)